I tried to place you
on a cramped pedestal
of my own design
small, like a 19th century
zoo cage
to tame your wild heart
and blunt your teeth
make you less you
so I could rest easy
but alone
unwounded but scarred
so I wouldn’t wonder
if you were hunting
through pulsing nightclubs
tonight
not forced to imagine
the migrating flesh
you feast on
in a communion
of transient carnality
a glutton
remorseful
but only when spotted
in the daylight
with the fierce glint
of contentment
that you can’t quite disguise
as I try to cage you
once more
on an ill-fitting pedestal
of my own design
Here are two other free verse poems I’ve written (that’s it, the whole repertoire)
Or check out a couple of real poets who kindly grace my site:
And Bojana Stojcic. Her site is currently private, but I’ll link you to one of her poems Conquering Freedom, Et Cetera on the Visual Verse site.
Ill-fitting, indeed. Keep up the good work, Sean, and thanks for the shout out.
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You’re welcome, Bojana. And thanks for your support and encouragement.
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You deserve it, Sean. Keep up the good work. I’m not just saying that…I never do, so you better take it seriously.
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so I wouldn’t wonder
if you were hunting
through pulsing nightclubs
tonight
not forced to imagine
the migrating flesh
you feast on
in a communion
of transient carnality — these are such great lines, Sean! Seriously, this poem is something I’d like to have written myself. Perfect choice of theme too!
And thank you very much!
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You’re welcome!!
As far as the theme, people make this mistake all the time. I was especially guilty of it as a young man which led to all kinds of emotional turmoil. I’d become infatuated with a woman and eventually had to accept her as a real person, warts and all, and not try to jam her into my template of perfection, which wasn’t fair to her and would only lead to disappointment on my part. If I could not accept her for who she was, it meant we weren’t right together. I had to realize, this is who this person is. And this is why she is like that. It helped me diminish hurt and anger when someone did something disappointing. Instead of trying to ‘fix’ her to meet my vision, I either accepted her flaws, moved on completely or redefined the relationship as a friendship, which I’ve done a few time.
I was debating on taking out the lines:
“small, like a 19th century
zoo cage”
I changed the poem a bit after I wrote that and not sure if it still fits or works.
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Many people have made the same mistake, me included. Accepting others for who they are is part of becoming more mature, I guess. And if we can’t accept them (because there are some people who are unacceptable), it’s better to show them the door than try to fix things with them.
I see nothing wrong with the lines — maybe what I would do is take out “19th century”, unless you have a very specific reason for using it.
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I used it because I saw a photo of an old zoo from that period and the cage was so small.
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Makes sense. Another option might be a bird cage.
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Don’t you think it takes growing older to learn to accept people for who they are, warts and all?With age comes wisdom!
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Wisdom and a lack of energy 😜
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So simple and yet so meaningful… I think everyone would relate to these lines.. It takes a while to understand and accept people as they are… Sometimes it even costs loosing a great relationship to get this simple thing.
Such beautiful lines …☺️🙏
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I definitely agree. And thank you so much for the compliment.
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This is deep, it can be energy draining to accept people out of maturity but they fail to realize that. You’re good at what you do. I have nominated you for The Sunshine Award Blogger. Congratulations!
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Thanks! I’m honored for the nomination and the kind words. I’m traveling right now but will be back in a couple of days and will respond then. Thank you again and glad you enjoyed the poem.
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You’re welcome, no rush, all at your own timing. Be safe❤
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